When
I step into my classroom, I see is twenty-four young adults who have
a great deal of knowledge and experience that can be harnessed to further
their own understanding of the world and what it means to be literate
and an academic writer. With this in mind, there are three other underlying
assumptions I make when I assign work in my course: that students understand
many of the concepts I'm trying to teach only they just don't realize
it, that students acquire writing skills by actually writing, and that
literacy is not a solitary event but a collaborative process. I will
address and illustrate each in relation to components of the course.
In
the essay, "Introduction: How a Genre Approach to Literacy Can Transform
the Way Writing is Taught", Bill Cope and Mary Kalantzis "stress 'natural'
learning through 'doing' writing." (1) The fundamental concept behind
this is that we do not learn how to write by having someone tell us
about it, but by doing the activity itself. With this in mind, I know
that the structured fastwrites, "Writing to Discover", and reading responses
are invaluable to the objectives of English 101. By responding to texts
that examine writing, by exploring their own understanding of concepts
of what it means to write, and by bringing their own personal experiences
into the writing process, students come to understand academic writing
in a way that is far more authentic than being told what academic writing
is. They learn "through 'doing'"; they harness what they already know
and through practice are able to push their abilities and understanding
to new levels through practice.
My
favorite writing activity in English 101 is an in-class writing assignment
where I ask my students to write a letter to their parents, to a friend,
and to a judge, explaining a speeding ticket they recently received.
While most students have a difficult time switching from writer based
to reader based prose, this activity allows them to see that they already
know a great deal about writing for specific audiences. It is this type
of discovery writing that helps build confidence and promotes an authentic
understanding of the skills I aspire to help my students recognize and
utilize in their writing. That is exactly why I know the fastwrites,
"Writing to Discover", and reading responses are so pivotal to the courses
success.
Another aspect of my classroom is a heavy reliance on collaboration.
During almost every class session, I ask my students to either work
with a partner on an activity or work in peer-editing groups to discuss
essays, provide constructive criticism on each others work, or discuss
a specific topic. The simple and perhaps cliché reason for this is that
literacy is not created in a vacuum, it is a collaborative effort that
starts from the day we are born, simply because we write about our world,
the influence of others, we constantly learn from the experiences of
our lives. Frank Smith put it best when he stated that, "It is through
mutual endeavors, helping each other, that children (and adults) learn
constantly out of school, in their work and their play, so inconspicuously
that no one is aware that learning is taking place." (70) Over the course
of my time with my students I make collaboration a large part of their
writing for these reasons. Whether working in a peer group or one on
one, students are not only learning more about their own writing but
also how to function in an academic community.
The
central focus of my English 101 course is the six essays I have my students
complete. The collaborative work and the exploratory writing they do
is meant to create a foundation on which these essays are built and
then revised. Again, instead of writing just one or two essays I push
my students to "learn through 'doing'" by writing six essays of different
types throughout the course. Each genre (personal, persuasive, analysis,
reflective) allows the student to practice writing for different audiences,
gain revision skills, and develop their writing for the new academic,
discourse community they've entered here at Western. By having the students
showcase what they feel to be their best work as a form of final assessment,
again I am hoping to build their confidence by allowing them to show
me, through their strongest writing sample, that they've obtained the
objectives I set out for the course.
It
is clear to me that the topics I choose to have my students write about
in their essays would be frowned upon by the likes of William Bennett
and E.D. Hirsch, traditionalist who believe that I am doing my students
and society a great disservice by not forcing them to write about the
classical canon or important literary genres. I disagree. Cope and Kalantzis
also take my stance and express my feelings when they state that, "[what]
if the canon did not 'work' for you, with all its gender, ethnic and
class biases, you would probably fail." The point of being a writing
instructor is not to force the system's ideology into every assignment,
but to create an environment where students can grow in defining their
skills. The most authentic writing assignment isn't a persuasive essay
on Romeo and Juliet, but on something that really matters, something
that affects them. That is where I see the most growth, the most benefit
to society occurring. So instead of writing about Shakespeare, we tackle
issues of gender, literacy, media persuasion, and other meaningful issues
that effect the lives of my students. By allowing them to bring their
real life experiences into what they write and by tackling real world
issues that often alienate when ignored, I am providing a far more authentic
writing experience for my students.
It
is the combination of all the components of English 101 that pushes
students past their writer-based prose into the world of academic writing.
Through practice, collaboration, and challenging the way they view literacy
and the world, they grow and acquire more mature, academic writing skills.
Work
Cited:
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Bennett,
William J. Address at the 29th Annual Convention of the California
Association of Teachers of English. Department of Education, 1987.
Cope,
Bill and Kalantzis, Mary. "Introduction: How a Genre Approach to Literacy
Can Transform the Way Writing Is Taught." Powers of Literacy.
Falmer Press Ltd, 1993.
Smith,
Frank. Joining the Literacy Club. Heinemann, 1988.





© Kati Tilley 2001